Thanks for the feedback everyone! 🙂

Hmm… It seems that the general consensus is that the kick etc. doesn’t work for the piece. I might have a go at a different version of this piece at some stage, with a different direction of development. I’m glad, though, that you all seem to like the piano, the strings, or both. 🙂

@Din: Thanks for the feedback, Din! I may well do what you say, and “get back on the horse and finish it.” 😀